http://bgerry.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] bgerry.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] aviv_b_artwork 2010-07-24 03:16 am (UTC)

What a wonderful tale, should be sub-titled "Aviv_b's Journey".

Now a question as to why Jack's seeing people stopped at Ianto? Wouldn't it go further to earlier friends, lovers and family?

And the line at the where "Everything goes dark" In my mind just begged for Jack to wake up, walk into the bathroom as Ianto was stepping out of the shower and say "I just had the strangest dream" ala the TV show Dallas. I am so showing my age by knowing that, lol.

Again, thank you for a wonderful tale and will read it again when the PDF is posted. Hugs

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