Dancing To My Tune

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Author: Aviv_b
Title: Dancing to My Tune
Words: 100, written for tw100, challenge 180 - Dancing
Rating: PG-13
WARNING:  Implied non-con (nothing graphic)
Characters:  Jack, Ianto
Disclaimer: Not mine; Aunty B's and RTD's
Summary: Ianto leads Jack on a merry dance.

 

The flirtations intensified with each passing week. The smiles, the brush of a shoulder, the unexpected glances were driving him insane. But every time he tried to reciprocate, Ianto would skitter away to the archives.

Then Ianto’s secret was discovered. After the shouting, the threats, the recriminations, and the others went home, he grabbed Ianto by the arm, led him up from the basement, over to his office and down into his lair.

He pushed Ianto roughly onto his small bed and pulled off his belt and unzipped his trousers. “Time for you to dance to my tune, Mr. Jones.”

Comments

[kausingkayn.livejournal.com]

Aha. Cute ^_^
The summary was what pulled me in, reminded me of Inception, lol. I liked this.

[aviv-b.livejournal.com]

Hmmm...Cute was not what I was aiming for, LOL. Cute? Really?

[kausingkayn.livejournal.com]

0_0
.....it's not my fault I thought that was cute...I write about romantic serial killers in my free time....lol

[aviv-b.livejournal.com]

I see - this is all making so much sense now. If I ever decide to finish my Jeffrey Dahlmer musical - I know who to call, LOL.

[kausingkayn.livejournal.com]

:-D lol.

[akawho.livejournal.com]

A bit dark, but I love it. Any chance of a follow up story?

[aviv-b.livejournal.com]

Thanks. I hadn't planned on a follow up - but let me think on that a bit.

[mv-girl.livejournal.com]

Quite dark, gets darker every time I read it - oh, I like it. And I would second the request for more.
Thanks!!!

[aviv-b.livejournal.com]

But honestly, you don't want a non-con story, do you? I've only written one, and I'm not terribly comfortable about writing more. Suggestions?

[mv-girl.livejournal.com]

Honestly - no.
Hmm, how about some insights on their thoughts. Why is Jack 'forcing' himself on Ianto? Why doesn't Ianto resist? Why does he give in - willingly? Or not? Motivations? Intents?
And what happens afterwards? ... various possibilities for a dark, psychological sequel or series. ;)
Let me know if you need more suggestions or anything?

[mv-girl.livejournal.com]

lol - just saw now that tehre are actually lots of suggestions. But you see, the need for a sequel is there. The point you stopped at is just so .... disturbing.

[aviv-b.livejournal.com]

That's OK - these are all good ideas!

[teamrodent.livejournal.com]

And how do Myfanwy and the others feel about this, if they know about the non-con?

[aviv-b.livejournal.com]

If it takes place the others wouldn't know because Jack sent them home - but Myfanwy would. Now that would be an interesting story...Myfanwy's point of view - we may have a winner!

[honey-felidae.livejournal.com]

Reaction chart:

*first read* -> o_o
*second read* -> o_O
*third read* -> O_o
*fourth read* -> O_O
*sixth and last read* -> ;D

Don't know why I started grinning, but i did...

HOWEVER

i also want a fallow up, it is to good and awesome to stand alone. dont even need a full chapter. I think one or two or ten drabbels is all i need :D

[aviv-b.livejournal.com]

Here's my question - what does follow up mean to you? Not going to write non-con story so just show the aftermath, or did it happen at all?

[honey-felidae.livejournal.com]

I mean the aftermah, cause i think something like that should show the aftermath, you know?

It leave a knot in the stomach, such stories.

[aviv-b.livejournal.com]

Ok that makes sense.

[honey-felidae.livejournal.com]

somtimes i am known to make sense, not often, but sometimes :D

*hugs & cookies*

[jooles34.livejournal.com]

Oh deliciously dark and wonderful. So wrong but you kinda find yourself on Jack's side here. If there is a follow up in the offering add me to the list of people that would like to see it.

[aviv-b.livejournal.com]

So help me out here. I really don't won't to write a chapter of non-con. Would you like to see the aftermath, a time jump ahead - I'm not quite sure how to handle this.

[jooles34.livejournal.com]

I think you have a couple of options. You could twist it away from non-con and have it be what Ianto wants and needs at this time. He doesn't have an excuse to run from his attraction to Jack now so he can give into it.

Or you could do the aftermath in a similar way with Ianto being almost grateful to Jack for making him feel alive.

[aviv-b.livejournal.com]

Hmmm...I have to give this more thought. I don't want to wander into the 'he really wanted it cliche' of the old romance novels.

[jooles34.livejournal.com]

No I agree totally, that's very rocky territory. It would have to be more like Ianto taking the lead, becoming the agressor; or taunting Jack. I see someone else made a suggestion of Jack not being able to go through with it. That's also very good.

[aviv-b.livejournal.com]

I like that as well.

[toshiani007.livejournal.com]

Wonderful!!! I loved it!!!

[aviv-b.livejournal.com]

Thanks - once in a while the twisted muse comes out.

[scifiangel.livejournal.com]

There are two ways you can do this. One, just show the aftermath. Jack feeling all guilty and ashamed and Ianto ashamed that he actually enjoyed it. Or Jack starts it, but can't go through with it. I can even see him with tears threatening and shacky voice. Ianto being moved by it. Jack telling him to get out before he changes his mind, etc.

Loved it BTW.

[aviv-b.livejournal.com]

I like that second idea - I could handle that.

[bk_forever]

Ouch! I can understand Jack being frustrated, and I can understand him wanting to punish Ianto both for the betrayal he feels from Ianto hiding Lisa and for being a tease, but that's a bit extreme considering Ianto was probably in shock as well as grieving after Lisa's execution. I hope Jack comes to his senses before he does something he can't undo without resorting to retcon!

(Ooops, sorry, my comment is nearly as long as your fic!)

[aviv-b.livejournal.com]

I think Jack's a bit in shock as well. Which doesn't justify but might explain his reaction.

[littleni.livejournal.com]

Love a good drabble, seeing as I can't write to save my life!
Just a quick question, what if we twist Iantos "secret"?.
Move it away from something big and more towards something everyday.
Please excuse this comment if it does'nt make sense, I am still a virgin at commenting.....

[aviv-b.livejournal.com]

That's OK! Not sure I can do this because the Cyberwoman is already part of the story...but we could tweek the reason why Jack is so angry.